The One I Loved!

Pulse Trace, Healthcare Medicine, Heartbeat
Based on a true story.πŸ’”πŸ’”

I was locked inside my house and just then, got separated from my beloved spouse.
The world says, the relationship is unreal but, how can the nature be so cruel?

It took me away, away from him. Since then, my life has become dim!
The moment I realized, he is losing his consciousness, I ran out of my house just to save him.

I did not know what to do, I kept praying to find a doctor to save his life,
After all, I was his artificial wife.

I left no stone un-turned to look for a medicine for him,
But, all my attempts went in vain. I can’t express, my heart was in deep pain!

Since then, I am living my life without him,
I look normal on the outside but, on the inside my heart screams!

He sometimes visits me in my dreams!

I once in a while, check his heartbeat, to make sure, I haven’t lost him forever,
To lose him at such a crucial time, I’d thought never!

His heart is still beating, though he can’t accompany me in my walks of life,
I miss him a lot, after all, I am his artificial wife.

I do not know, when he’d come back to life!
The thought of losing him is like someone piercing my heart with a knife.

The doctors are unavailable right now and he’s on his bed waiting for things to become fine,
The day he’s back on his feet, with him, I’d dine!

Until then, I would keep missing this beautiful creation,
When he was alive, I’ve never showered him with appreciation.

How selfish are we humans, taking everything for granted,
When he was alright, I have always just ranted.

I now know your worth,
Waiting for your new birth.

Dear Phone, for you I mourn!


For Penable’s Poetry Competition – β€˜Love’

Competition open to all my readers. Have fun!😊

Poetry that won the competition! Click here for the resultsπŸ‘‰ Competition Results

Edited on Thursday, 27th May 2020 

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121 Thoughts

    1. Hahahaha….πŸ˜‚ I was wondering why were you about to cry. I did not see whose and which post it was.

      I felt so bad for you when I read that and then when I saw it was my today’s post, I started laughing.πŸ˜‚πŸ€£

      Hope you liked the twist!πŸ˜¬πŸ˜‚


                    1. Well, just want to share this that you look like one of my closest friend. Though your pic isn’t clear, it still reminds me of her. I did share your comment on my blog with my fam and they too said the same thing – You look like her.😊😊


                    2. Oh boyyy!!! There you go!!😍❀️🀣 She’s from Kerela too.🀣🀣 I got this strong intuition that you are so I asked. See, I was right.😬😬

                      I’d call you NiMoh or no no, what about Moh-Lu?πŸ˜…

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                    3. Hahaha…. It doesn’t matter what someone’s age is.😊 Don’t feel that way about yourselves. Age doesn’t matter, honestly. You should be young at heart.❀️

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                    4. I am literally someone who preaches that.. I do not care about my age πŸ™‚ and believe me.. am not that old too πŸ˜› πŸ˜› just hate being called molu… that’s all πŸ™‚

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  1. I don’t know why? If this will keep happening i have to leave wordpress and try other platforms where people’s do not have any problem with comments! I am seeing there are some peoples who have some problem with my contents .

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    1. Hey, don’t get disheartened. It happens a lot of us. It has happened with me as well. You can always connect with the customer support team. They’re the best team I’ve ever met. Just speak with them, they’ll help you out.

      Not sure, how long you’ve been here. But, if it’s just recent, hang-on, things will fall in place. I love the people out here.❀️ And so would you.😊


        1. Oh congratulations, dear! You’ll love this place. Trust me. I’ve been here for a year now but, just have been active for a month now. I got my 1st follower just last month. I ain’t kidding. You’ll love blogging here.

          You at least interacted on your own. For months, I did not even know or should I say I did not try to find more about this platform and do there were no followers. Whatever I’ve achieved is just in a month’s time.πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡


            1. I surely will. Btw, I was just checking but, your comment dragged me back. Boy, you’re just 4 days old out here and you’ve got more followers than me.😱 That’s crazy!

              I am glad that you’re interacting with other Bloggers. Wish I knew back then. I also wasn’t sure about a lot of things so I was hesitant in connecting.

              I will surely check your content.πŸ‘πŸΌ


                  1. Read lots of things experience many things on physical level whether its spirituality, yoga, science etc. I am not saying i am a very knowledgeable person but I have been continuously watching my thoughts from 3 years and by doing this i got answers of many questions!

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  2. I’d probably be roll over & slip into a coma if anything bad happened to my phone. 🀣 Reading back it all made sense to me, such divine outburst of love could have outpoured only for a mobile rather than a human being. πŸ˜‚πŸ€£

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            1. Hahaha..🀣🀣 Why did your comment get moved to spamπŸ˜‚ I just saw it now.

              Well, I didn’t literally mean that.πŸ˜‚πŸ™„ Well, I have a substitute for now. So no issues. Will check these later on.😊

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                    1. Hahaha… I initially thought so but, then at the very last moment I thought it was this.πŸ˜…

                      No, nothing actually. My plans never work. It turns out to be disastrous and moreover, I just keep planning and never get it done. So after a lot of observations on my own life, I’ve stopped planning.😬


              1. Yea damaging a phone is more heart breaking than a break up, at least for meπŸ™ˆ. So that’s why hope everything gets resolved at your end soon. πŸ˜…πŸ€£πŸ˜‚

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          1. Thanks, I’ll surely participate in it. I’ll post it later half of the next month if that’s alright. June, promises to be an emotionally instable month for me so let’s how it goes. πŸ˜…

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              1. I don’t like to talk about it as yet, I prefer to wait until I weave a rhyme around it. Let that be a surprise that shall unfurl on the 17th June… So stay tuned I guess. πŸ˜…

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          1. Are you asking about my phone?? Iwas referring to it in the past tense. πŸ˜… I’ve had 3 different phones till now!! The older 2 broke down and I’m still going strong with the 3rd!! Hope it stays!! πŸ˜†

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  3. I was becoming sad and sadder as I was moving forward and the imagery tucked at my heartstrings. And then you just dropped that bomb and I was like, “WhatπŸ˜‚”. Really loved it🀩

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  4. Haha… You got me in the first half… πŸ˜‚ Nice poem…! The Rhyming and the message are just right..! This is the first time I’ve seen someone mourn for a phone. That too through a poem..! Anyways, may you get a brand new iPhone 11 ProMax… RIP old phone…

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    1. Hehhe… That was the whole intention.😜 Well, thank you!😬

      Ummm… I don’t like πŸ‘οΈ phone but, I hope your wishes for me comes true and I get an upgrade.πŸ˜…


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